smi1ey's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[HOTM 3 Part A]

Wow! Long AND Funny!

I haven't seen the others, but standing alone, this was an excellent toon! Great job on the voices, although the volumes are inconcistent at times. Very funny though, can't wait for the next one!

[kegel: creepiest creepy]

Comic Genius

I think this is your funniest yet! All the subtle jokes had me rolling! (The main jokes, too! ;p)

[Revolutionary war]

"OMG Ambush!"

It is obvious you went more for laughs than historical accuracy. It's funny to see all these people whining about that! I'm sure you're class will love that movie. I like the ending too, where you didn't learn anything. That's me in history class, lol!

[Maynard 2]

WTF

He does movies for stupiddotcom, you moron! How about you research that before giving him a 0!

[A Couple of Shorts Finale]

LOL!

Me and my bro were rolling to this one! Awesome!

[The Raven (As We Know It)]

Not bad... but could be improved greatly.

I am not gonna harp on the fact that this type of movie is becoming WAY to common on newgrounds. Hehe, this one even had the characters being built in the the beginning; how original. =/

Aside from that, I think that you should spend a bit more effort good voice acting, and possibly better mouth animations. These 2 things are extremely important! I would also recommend finding an ACTUAL GIRL to do Sydney's voice. I mean... seriously...

Also, I noticed that this animation was pretty much completely devoid of any sound effects except for dialogue. I mean, we can't event get the everlasting harp sound for a flash back... or something?

As I stated before, I think the real issue with this film is not necessarily the animation/art style. It is mainly in coming up with some convincing voices and effects to compliment the good writing. Good luck!

[KILLER KAZUKI]

Very good movie

I think that your film was very well done. I can tell you spent some time planning out the episode, rather than just throwing it together.

However, I think that if you do more of these, I would really recommend improving your sound effect/music quality. I mean, AFI really did not go at all with the theme of the film, and we all disturbed is completely over used! I think some classical music for an intro, really who have added some depth.

Sure there were plenty of cliches. Zombies, a guy who somehow manages to walk/jog through tons of baddies, etc. But you really stylized this well with the graphic detail of the violence and the moves. I really like how you tipped your hat to the (unfortunately) unknown movie, Equilibrium.

All around good movie, and I look forward to seeing more of your work... oh yeah, and it would be nice if you could make your own backgrounds, rather than using crappily enlarged photos. :)

VirulentShuriken responds:

Equilibium is an awesome movie, the BGs will all be fixed in the Special Edition ^^

[Holy Sword 2]

Cool Movie

I think you did a great job adding an artistic flair to the film using fbf animation and perspective to portray the battle.

[Ducktales 2:Residuck Evil]

Well Done!

That was absolutely hilarious! There are quite a few pop culture references that just cracked me up! An absolute unique style, that may seem lame at first, but by the end of the film I was loving it!