needs music
The art is great, and so is the animation and style, but you really need to work on the sound aspect of your next episode. You definitly need some background music. The feel of this movie would have been soooo much slicker with music! Instead, it felt dry, and a bit slow with parts where there was little or no sound.
Also, work on the recording quality for the voices. They sounded really echoey (i'm sure they were done in your house), and thus kinda of distracted from the quality of the film. Great job as far as visuals go though! ^_^