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[Auf Achse]

Wow!

Was that all done fbf? Excellent job! I bet that took quite some time to complete. I very unique style, with good fighting, a good story, no stick-figures... I couldn't as for more! :)

AligatorHead responds:

Fra'ym bie frayme

["Life 101" ep. 1]

Pretty Good...

It looked great, and the animation was excellent. However, I think it was lacking a bit in the humor department. The pace was just kinda slow. I would say work on the writing a bit more for the next one. :)

AsthmaticHamster responds:

Sorry about the humor. Because of the contest, this cartoon had to be destined to kids 8 to 12, so I was kinda restricted with the jokes.

[Phenomenal First Look]

Pretty Damn Cool

I can't wait for the actual game! A couple suggestions for that:
- Change the image for when he is in midair after a jump. He looks too stiff.
- Vary the sound effects a bit more.
- Make controls customizeable.
Goof luck!

Blaklyon responds:

the first 2 sudgestions I can do. but the last one I can do because I can't action script that. maybe if I find a action scripter that can do make that happen, I will point that out. Keep the sudgestions comming!

[That Halo Parody 5 (SE)]

Thanks for the lil Halo Babies plug...

I posted a news plug at HaloBabies.net for you. :) The cartoon was pretty good, but a bit fast paced!
-mrsmiley (that was already taken on here, dammit!)

TheComet responds:

lol. thx.
Episode 6 is a huge episode. A friend of mine drew a godlike new master chief. The next episode is going to poke fun at alot of current events, ie: George Dubyah Chief, Coveraqis, Saddam Elite :P
It should be about 5 minutes long in the end, got alot of help in it :) (not to mention high scoring)
If you want to see a screenshot of the first part, I have one in the BlackMaze forums, www.blackmaze.com, go into the forums, look in the show off section for the that halo parody 6 thread.

[Storybook 1: Synj]

So simple, yet so funny!

That was great! That is something that anyone could have submitted, but you pulled it off relly well. Any chance of getting Priscilla's number? ;P

Dustball responds:

No.

[Nintendroid's News]

HORRIBLE SOUND

I had to turn it off, cuz' it was torture to listen too!

DJJ-asshole responds:

now...u can't turn ur box LOWER...dumbass, that's no reason to give it a review and give me a 2...

[REAL Mushroom Kingdom 3]

Mario Meets 'Days of Our Lives'

Hehe, pretty funny concept you have going. Although I don't think as a whole is the too terribly funny, it did have some great lines! "Show me your boobs!" was awesome, and the whole Black Sabbath reference rocked! I would say work on your battle animation, so it doesn't look as smooth and slow. (Although I realize some was slow-mo.) The battles just seemed... I dunno, so easy for the characters, like they weren't really hitting each other. Bravo on not using blood and gore everywhere though!

osborneanimation responds:

Yes. After working weeks on those battle scenes, I've thrown them out, and getting some feedback. And I agree with a lot of the things you say. I'm definitely going to speed it up (and actually, the slow-mo wouldn't've been slow-mo if SWiSH didn't suck at processing it, but there was nothing I can do). I think the Mario was easy because its Mario. He's God. He could take on anything, especially Goombas and Hammer Bros. Luigi had a little tougher of a time. I'm thinking of making the battles a little bit more gruesome/realistic. I'm just really cartoony in my head, and that's why they turned out like that, but I'm trying to improve, honest!

[Gumbi - Part 2]

Great Job!

Insanely good job on the claymation - I haven't seen better on NG. The use of Legos was hilarious, and there was some pretty damn cool looking action! Kinda wierd ending, but good stuff.

Chrispington responds:

Thanks heaps!

4 large heaps of thanks.

[Tier]

Incredible

I love the black, white, and red color scheme. Very very cool movie! I can tell you put a lot of work into it.

poxpower responds:

Yeah I can tell people I put a lot of work into it too. But its not exactly true :o

[Little Fighter Alpha Ch.6]

Great Job!

I am a fan of the series, and you definitly improve with each film! What was up with Deep just walking away though? LOL!

MaxR responds:

You will find out in the later chapters.