i have seen the whole series...
I know you put some good work into this, and I give you props since I haven't submitted anything. Although honestly, I think the writing simply could have been better. It felt like all the characters were pretty flat, as in, no one was really all that excited. Also, the lack of any background music in most scenes tended to dry up the humor as well. Maybe the main problem was that the main character was really boring. I dunno
Overall, it's more than could do, but I just think that maybe if more time was spent on this getting better voice actors and better writing, this really could have been an epic journey. Good luck with your next endeavor.